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My hearts breaking in two

with the thoughts that you and I are through

thinking that our lives have just begun

but knowing now that we are done

wondering what I have done

to make this love filled life unravel & come undone

my eyes are filling with tears

with the memories of these past years

wondering if I’ll feel your touch again

or if things have gone too far to mend

thinking of what could of been

though none of this could of been seen

Looking back now, there are so many things that could of been done

thinking of the memory of us

knowing that it has ended

and nothing can be done

I’ll lock you away in my heart

where from now until the end of time you will stay


Posted by heartness1, 19th April 2013


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  • A very sad poem,hope you are in a better place now and wishing you all the best.

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  • That has got to be the saddest thing I have read in a long time. I wonder if you got back together? I wonder if it was a man/woman relationship or was it the loss of a child? Very sad either way :,(

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  • So sad :( hope things are better for you now!

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  • its a good story to read

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  • nice story to have a read

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  • great exellent

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  • Poetry is food for the soul.

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  • Thanks for sharing your poem. I hope your heart is again strong.

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  • I hope the sadness has receded a little now.

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  • What a lovely poem, thank you so much for sharing it.

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