My 12 year old daughter was given a task in creative writing at school. She had to write a snap shot and it had to have feeling . I was very surprised to read she piece, and I wanted to share this with you. It is called MOTHER EYE…….. I look down at my baby. You wouldn’t think anything was wrong with him. All of a sudden the heart monitors start beeping like crazy. Heaps of doctors come rushing in. They say he need surgery urgently….. It has been hours. I’m waiting outsides the surgery. The docrot FINALLY come out. He tells me the gut wrenching news. The first time I read this it made me cry. I hope you liked her story too.

Posted by jenny9761, 31st March 2014

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  • Thanks for sharing your daughter’s story.


  • that is fantastic creativity, I hope she keeps developing her skills.


  • She can certainly write with feeling. I wanted to know what came next.


  • Very evocative! If your daughter enjoys writing, perhaps she’d like to try something called NaNoWriMo – National Novel Writing Month. It’s held every November, and although I’m not sure if it has a ‘junior’ section, the aim for adult writers is to write 50,000 words over the course of the month of November. I participated last year, and it was an amazing experience. If you think she might be interested, check it out at http://www.nanowrimo.org

    • Thanks for sharing this link and for the information for all budding creative writers!


  • Interesting topic choice, but well done.


  • very good and she is only 12yrs old good on her but also sad story


  • Wow That’s Great And She Is Only 12, (Very Sad Story Tho)


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