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My 12 year old daughter was given a task in creative writing at school. She had to write a snap shot and it had to have feeling . I was very surprised to read she piece, and I wanted to share this with you. It is called MOTHER EYE…….. I look down at my baby. You wouldn’t think anything was wrong with him. All of a sudden the heart monitors start beeping like crazy. Heaps of doctors come rushing in. They say he need surgery urgently….. It has been hours. I’m waiting outsides the surgery. The docrot FINALLY come out. He tells me the gut wrenching news. The first time I read this it made me cry. I hope you liked her story too.
Posted by jenny9761, 31st March 2014











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