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Thanks to this creative MoM for the Aussie version of the famous poem ‘A Visit from St. Nicholas.’ Here’s An Australian Reindeer Story for Christmas.

 T’was the night before Christmas and throughout the bush the animals awoke to a noisy whoosh.

A reindeer had landed in the Eucalypt tree as Santa’s sleigh flew away over the trees.

Kangaroo and wombat looked up at the tree.

‘What are you doing there?’ The kangaroo asked while he danced around in glee.

The reindeer’s eyes were teary and sore, his red nose shone from the branch he landed on.

‘Well, Dasher, Dancer, Vixen and Comet were chewing the reigns when we passed through a scrambled omelette.

Cupid and Blitzen tried to hang on, but Mrs. Clause’s egg mixture was far too strong.

Freddy the Echidna sat back with a fright and yelled up the tree: ‘So, no Christmas presents tonight?’

The reindeer struggled against the strong branch as Kangaroo jumped about.

‘It’s no use,’ he said boxing the tree. ‘I can’t seem to get the reindeer free.’

The wind picked up and storm clouds blew in as the reindeer shivered and called out to him.

‘It’s Christmas Eve and Santa is late. I’m Rudolph you see and without me the presents will all deflate.’

The animals sat back in the bush in a huddle to think, whilst the reindeer wanted a warm drink.

Along came a koala that looked at the group. He tutted and smiled then jumped through a hula hoop.

‘Hello Rudolph, long time, no see ‘He said.

The reindeer craned his neck around and smiled.

‘Oh yes, some centuries ago, when Santa was lost in the bush with nowhere to go. You showed him the way and helped him to see that the Aussie bush was full of animals on Christmas Eve.’

The koala’s claws ripped at the branch while kangaroo held out his spindly hands. With a crash, a bang and a thump too reindeer fell into kangaroos’ paws.

Their bush tucker stockings were hung with care draped over branches hoping Santa Clause would soon be there.

With a whoosh, a sigh and a bang, an old wooden sleigh appeared, and a man dressed in red was here.

‘Ho, ho, ho what have we here?’ He asked rubbing his belly as Rudolph came near.

‘Oh, Santa I thought I’d lost my way,’ reindeer replied so very tired, from his long day.

Santa Clause touched his nose, ‘it’s time for a flight. Children are waiting all over the world we couldn’t disappoint them without Rudolph in my herd.’

As kangaroo, koala, echidna and wombat waved goodbye, the sleigh flew higher and higher up in the sky.

Off with a flick of the reins he went as Rudolph led the way for Christmas day.

The last thing the animals heard before sleep arrived was Santa Clause calling over Australian skies.

‘Merry Christmas to all and to all a good night!’

 

 

 

  • Thanks for all your lovely comments.

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  • I love this. It warms my heart especially with the bushfires going on and our poor native animals

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  • Love this version. So cute to learn and teach to the kids!

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  • Great Aussie version

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  • wow what a great australian version – I love this and will be sharing with my kids next christmas – thank you

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  • Some people are just so creative.

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  • This is brilliant. If this is the Mum who has written other magnificent stories maybe she should make a booklet of them.


    • I love all the feed back . I may just submit this story and a few others to see if I can get it published in a tiny- tweeny book for children.-Fingers crossed.

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  • so clever, I am amazed how some people have the knack for creative writing.

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  • I do hope this was reposted on facebook or whatever other social media you use. Too good not to be passed on.

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  • Interesting article. Thank you.

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  • So cute they look really good

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  • AwWww I loved how this incorporated both native flora and fauna in it!
    I think it’s hard to imagine a hot Christmas when the rest of the world is dreaming of a white one!

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  • Thank I hope you all had had a wonderful Aussie Christmas! I love to write Aussie stories and have done 3 children’s picture books aimed at Indigenous children encouraging them to read more and to open up their mind to imagination.

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  • This is so very creative. Well done.

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  • I remember reading this a little while ago. Love it!

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